November Sung

from the east she rises
pushes past the curtains
now climbs the staircase
her hair amongst branches
her dress against towers
she ascends
then braces for the fall

Comments (5)

  1. connie wrote::

    how are you doing, Charlie? it’s nice to see you writing, but your words sound sad.

    Sunday, November 23, 2008 at 1:20 pm #
  2. Charlie Fan wrote::

    hi connie, thanks for dropping by. don’t know why but just get caught in the down and outs. no real reason. i think it is cyclic.

    Sunday, November 23, 2008 at 11:09 pm #
  3. connie wrote::

    i feel ya. treat yourself well and do what you need to cycle out. so you can make room for the unexpected.

    Monday, November 24, 2008 at 6:23 pm #
  4. Charlie Fan wrote::

    fighting the alcoholic tendencies. staying sober more than twice a week really helps.

    Monday, December 1, 2008 at 12:37 pm #
  5. connie wrote::

    stay well, charlie…

    Monday, December 1, 2008 at 10:01 pm #