Past Tense

She followed the river pouring from his mouth, floating deltas twisting in air, and will understand (in a later life) that they were ghosts all along, and well — you can never really love a ghost.

Comments (2)

  1. connie wrote::

    i enjoyed the one you removed. have you been writing more, as resolved?

    Monday, January 14, 2008 at 10:37 pm #
  2. Charlie Fan wrote::

    it was an old one, somehow it always sounded a bit off. writing is not going too well. bloo.

    Monday, January 14, 2008 at 11:21 pm #