Tidal Theory

Fleeting; in the long faced evening
A cockroach rattles between cracks
Searching for perfume

On a curling path, if drawn in with
Needle tip, resembles the unraveling
Of hair pushed against

The embankment of shears; a sullen
Thread to lower the hollow stones in
Your pounding chest.

Comments (3)

  1. connie wrote::

    you know, the first few lines made me think of eliot’s “love song…”

    kind of sad and existential and universal

    Thursday, August 2, 2007 at 3:35 pm #
  2. Charlie Fan wrote::

    Golly, one of my favorite poems by Eliot. By anyone. Ever.

    Friday, August 3, 2007 at 12:44 pm #
  3. connie wrote::

    i second that.

    if there was ever a poem to read and read again — that would be IT. the godfather of modernist poems, practically.

    Friday, August 3, 2007 at 1:24 pm #