Unem-ploy-ed

Furniture’s re-arranged
And now I face a window,
A perception of opportunity;

Of all the things to turn to,
It isn’t Marilyn Monroe
Or even that print of Paris,

But rather, something
Altogether frightening.

Comments (3)

  1. D wrote::

    =)

    Monday, June 4, 2007 at 11:27 pm #
  2. connie wrote::

    nice revision

    Tuesday, June 5, 2007 at 11:29 am #
  3. connie wrote::

    effective! i like how the words roll of the tongue in this version

    Friday, June 8, 2007 at 10:01 pm #