Skin Deep

I am standing beside the door greeting guests,
And so god-damn thirsty,
Dousing fire with whiskey and ice when
She walks in, smelling like crushed petals and Italian wine,
And a name I don’t remember
But her dress lingers on and on like crisp white sails,
The only thing I can think about is maybe
She’ll dance with me but the bathroom mirror
Is an honest friend, speaks the truth of my condition,
So I spend the night talking to a car
And everyone else.

Comments (5)

  1. daFUster wrote::

    What you see in the bathroom mirror does not speak the truth of your condition, your mind does.

    Tuesday, August 1, 2006 at 6:58 am #
  2. daFUster wrote::

    … and thus our minds we must tame.

    Tuesday, August 1, 2006 at 6:59 am #
  3. Charlie Fan wrote::

    but it is a magic mirror. =)

    Tuesday, August 1, 2006 at 8:21 am #
  4. D wrote::

    Start writing! ^_^

    As your future publisher, I have to get you used to deadlines, ya know! ;-)

    Saturday, August 12, 2006 at 12:00 am #
  5. Charlie Fan wrote::

    What shall I write Madame Publisher?

    Sunday, August 13, 2006 at 8:29 pm #